Alex+O.'s+Introduction+and+Goals



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= All AboutMe Room2. = = Who is the coolest 4th grader ever? ALEX! = = My favorite color is Yellow. I like it because it is the color of the sun but I dont like the moon. Yellow is a good mix with black because, space is a really good backround for the sun. I like the sun. the sun is so big and hot that it takes up a 5th of outer space. Yes it is big. = = I like baseball. I want to be a professional base ball player. My favorite team is the Dodgers. I want to be number 21 well if i can. 21 is my favorite because it has the number one and two in it and the number two and one go good together. = = I love my family and they love me. If they didn’t I would run away L, but I would take my dog with me and also my wallet. I will by a bunch of candy. tehe. The kind of candy would be chocolate beans and the nitro takais. Thay are spicy but I still like it. then i would goto my aunt's houes because I think I am not so sure but i think that my aunt and uncle love me. = = My friends are cool. Why because they are really active like me will i think. Some of them include Nick and Alex well not me Alexander. they are crazy like me again. = = big, big words. I wish I was a good spelling just like who much I like who much I like baseball and math. Math is cool just like ME! It is cool because you can add. See I like to add six times six is thirty six. I can do better but i dont really want to. = = My goal at Saticoy School is to get better at reading. I even think that I am not so good at reading. And I know that this 4th and 5th class is going to make me a better reader. = = I like to learn by listening. I am not so good at listening because I have kind of bad remembering, but I like to learn stuff like power as in math even I never learned it. =

**Reader Feedback** Alex, what about the moon don't you like? What position does the number 21 play on the Dodgers baseball team? Have you ever been to Dodgers stadium? If you have, tell me about a time you went. Tell me more about your family, do you have any brothers or sisters? What kind of candy would you buy? What's your favorite thing to do with your friends? If you could go back in your essay and add the answers to my questions that would be great! -Heather L.

Looking forward to reading your essay Alex! --Mrs. Geib