Christian+C.'s+Introduction+and+Goals



All About Me

Who is the coolest fifth grader! Hello! My name is Christian and I am a fifth grader. My room number is 2 and I am nine years old.The name of my school is named Saticoy Elementary. My favorite color is green.My hobbies are running with my dog.His name is Marshmelo. He is a boy. He is a french poodle. We got him from mexico. I like running with my dog at the park. I like having pets so much. That is why our family decided to get a dog.

My favorite food is peperoni pizza. My family is six people including me. My family’s names are Mario, Lourdes, Mario Jr, Oscar, Daisy and I.My friends names Ashley, Jaden, and William. I would like to learn by drawing. One of my teachers I’ve had gave us snacks, candy, rootbeer floats and lots of P.E..What I need to work on in school is math. In the future I see myself as a hard worker. My favorite sport is soccer.My positions are forward and defence.

My favorite tv show is Family Guy. The reason I like Family Guy is because it is very funny. They only show it on sundays. When I grow up I would like to become very fast swimmer and runner. I would like to travel to Germany. I would like to travel to Germany because my brother and sister have gone.

My academic goal is to become smarter than I am now. My personal goal is to try to run 5 miles without stoping because my brother and siter did. I like to play with my toys and I also like to watch tv !!! I llike to play sometimes with my friend and watch tv.

My favorite book to read is Harry Potter book one. I am going to graduate fifth grade in 2011. I wonder how middle school would be like. I wonder if middle school will be scary, cool or exciting. The school I would like to go to is called Balboa Middle School. I want to go to that school because my dad works there and also because all of my brothers and sister have gone to that same school so I hope I go to that school. The End.

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I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib Christian, Where do you go running with your dog? What do you want to be famous for? Acting, Writing, being a Doctor or a Scientist? What do you like to watch on TV? What is your favorite part in Harry Potter and the Sorceror's Stone? If you could go back and answer my questions in your essay that would be great! -Heather L. ﻿You did great Christian! Just like what Heather said I also want to know w here do you go running with your dog and what is your dogs name and is your dog a boy or a girl? -Colton