Kristeen+J.'s+Introduction+and+Goals

  All About Me

Who’s the coolest fifth grader ever?! I don’t know but it’s not me. Hi. I’m Kristeen and this report is all about me. If you are interested in learning about me then pay attention. But if you don’t care then you might as well not even look.

Let me tell you a little bit about what I like to do outside of school. My hobbies are playing softball and taking care of animals. I like taking care of animals because I just love animals and I like softball because it is fun. My favorite color is blue because it is the color of the sky and the ocean.

My best friends are Anthonyand Reyline. They both go to fifth grade at Saticoy like me. Anthony is in Mr.Zaporie’s class and his class is right next to ours. Reyline is in Ms.Tygell’s class. Ms.Tygell's class is across the hall. I was in Ms.Tygell's class last year because she had a fourth/fifth combo class.

Some family members I am really close to are my mom, dad, brother (Stephen-15), sisters (Madison-5 and Jenifer-25), cousins (Autumn-7, Summer-5, Elisabeth-18 and Aydan-1), and my aunt (Deedee). My dad and brother live in Texas and my sister (Jenifer) lives in Las Vegas. I like to hang out with my aunt Deedee because I love her and she is nice to me.

My favorite subject is science and I learn best by hands on situations. My academic goal this school year is to master addition. What I need to work on in school is history.

My personal goal is to rescue 50 animals. I chose that goal because animals are my favorite things in the world. My favorite animals are dogs. I have loved dogs ever since my dog spike protected me when an older kid gave me a black eye. I was 3 and the older girl was 12. She told her mom that spike bit her even though he didn't. Her mom got mad so he had to be put down. Long story short Im hard to figure out. But still that was my life﻿! Thanks for your time.

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