Jacob+Z.'s+Introduction+and+Goals

 //All About Me // //I am 10 years old and I am going to be 11 years old. I love playin//g //baseball. Why//**,** //because I can play a different position every time and I can have fun with my team mates. I have played baseball for 5 years. I love to play with my cat Mister Jingles. I love my Mommy and Daddy and my brothers and my sister. I am going to be the best bmxer in the world. I love having sleepover's because it is fun, we can stay up late at night and we can have a pillow fights. The people who came were Justin, Jouvon, Noah and Dakota and it was awesome. This year is the best year yet because I have the best teachers ever. One is a PE teacher and a computer teacher and her name is Mrs.Gieb. Now number two teacher is a scienes teacher and he is builder and his name is Mr.Wulff. I love my Mommy and Daddy because they are the best in the world and they take care of me. I have two best friends ever and their names are Dakota and Justin why because one is friendly the second one is tough and thats how I like it. This year is going to be the best year ever.Mr.wulff and Mrs.Geib brought a Mexican black King snake ,a Beardide Dragon and his name is matches ,a Bearrdide Dragon his name is Smog ,a abial Corn snake and we have a new classroom those are or pets in room 2.//

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 I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib