Peyton+S.'s+Introduction+and+Goals

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All about me
Hi name is Peyton I’m 10 years old and i'm a 5th grader atsaticoy school. Ihave 3 brothers 2 sisters 1 mom and and 1 dad. Thier names are Matthew,Ryan is 2yrs old,Ally, and britni. My parents names are Melina and Jeff. Matthew is 5yrs old,Ryans 2yrs old,Jasons 1yrs old,Allys 11yrs old,and Britnis 21yrs old. My mom is 35yrs and my dad is 52yrs old. my goals are to get a scholership at noterdame college. i want to get a masters degree there.after college i want to get drafted by the colts.the reason i like the colts i am named after peyton manning the quarter back. he is my favorite football player. I will always will look up to him. ==== my hobies are drawing,sports, and skating. I'm always out playing with my friends. I'm either skating or playing football. I mostly like football my favorite position is tail back. It's just afancy word for runnig back. My best friend is fyll back right in front of me. Miost of the time he blocks for me. I have a huge hill and me and my friend mark go down it he goes on a scooter and i go on a skateboard. my friends names are Justin,Mark,Damon. and Tyler. I ment Damon and Mark by getting i trouble. I ment Justin by baseball he was on the same team. we were on the san diego padres we both made all-stars. I ment Tyler at school he sat right next tro me. I ment them all in second grade. we are all active people we all play baseball. And thats all about me. ====

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