Shiara+C.'s+Introduction+and+Goals

 __ All About Me- School Year Intro __

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Hi my name is Shiara and I am a fifth grader at Saticoy Elementary and this is my story. Have you ever wanted a teacher or teachers so bad the night before school you’re so anxious you can’t go to sleep? Well I have. The first day of school I liked it so much I didn’t want school to end. Mr.Wulff and Mrs.Geib taught us how to draw in detail. Who knew that a pencil could write in twelve different shades?  ======

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Well I want you to know more about me before you read on. I have six other brothers and sisters. One of my little brother’s names is Ezra. He’s six years old. My other little brother’s name is Eli. He’s five years old. I have two older brothers too. Their names are Devon and Tre. Devon is twenty-one and Tre is seventeen almost eighteen. Last but not least my two older sisters Kyrah and Shae. Kyrah is twelve and Shae is seventeen. And last but not least my mom and dad. My mom is blah and my dad is blah. I would tell you but then I would have to kill you then they would kill me. They can be cruel and unreasonable and mean and selfish. I may be exaggerating a little bit just a little but I always love them.  ======

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My hobbies is playing basketball with my team the Oxnard Lady Jags, and playing soccer with my team the Electric Eels. I am a wing on my basketball team, if you don’t know what that is it’s a position on the side of the basketball court. In soccer I am an attacker, if you don’t know what that means it is the three players that are at the ball when we do the kick off. My basketball team is a traveling team. We've been to Lompoc, Santa Clarita, and L.A. We go to L.A. a lot. Next July we are going to Las Vegas. We might go to Hawaii too. The girl’s names on my basketball team are Alexa, Shelby, Savanna, Kenya, Faith, Aailyah, Bri, Bridgette, Kelsey, and Sammi. On both teams we have a great bond. So it’s not like you throw or kick bad passes because you don’t like your team. Once me and basketball team went to L.A and we had a pizza slumber party at the hotel and they dared me to drink toilet water. Let’s make a long story short, I……..I’m not going to tell. That is for me to know and for you to find out!! I have brushed my teeth since then and used mouthwash!!!  ======

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When I grow up I want to be a pediatrician because well..........kids love me and I want a good paying job. My mom told me if I want to be a pediatrician I have to go to college for a long time. Eight years to be exact. That doesn't to sound hard does it?? I just have a passion for caring for little kids. It makes me so sad when they are hurt. When little kids cry it makes me want to cry. ======

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 I have to very best friends their names are Justine and Ahlexy. My best friend Justine doesn't know what she wants to be when she grows up. On the other hand Ahlexy wants to be a pro softball player. Ahlexy used to have a Siamese cat but when her dad took it to Apple Valley it ran away and they didn’t tell her for like years. Justine has such a fat dog that she might explode. Her dogs name is Bailey. Justine is awesome, she’s a NERD. Never Ending Radical Dudette. I’m a JERK. Jr. Educated Rich Kid. Oh Yeah!!!!!!! I don’t know exactly what Ahlexy is. She’s either part dog or part human. I’m just kidding. I had fun telling you my story. I hope you enjoyed it!!!  ======

**Reader Feedback** Hi Shiara, could you please put your essay into separate paragraphs? Also please go back and check your spelling and capitalization. I loved reading about you and you really have a great voice in your writing. It is fun to read! Add more! --Mrs. Geib

your essay is so awesome!! You are a natural Shiara at writing about yourself! If you play softball next year i'll see ya there.-jenessa